That was awesome

quite the namesake

great stuff

Bhahahahaha TAG B!TCH!

Wel

Got some cool sounds, i think its a bit too trebly, but i may be listening too loud.

Good stuff!

speakers may not be the problem

Your bass guitar and your kick drum are interfering almost every time that they interact. The bass guitar is way too loud in the bass range, and the kick is right there with it. Also consider humanizing the high hats a bit, its very rare that you will see a human drummer playing hats like this. Also get your snare attack up!

Levels are to high

You have got a good musical ear, and this composition has pretty decent style, but the mastering is not so great. Whatever mixer you are using, if any, use it more!